You said you knew best
You said I would be 
Like all of the rest 
And soon I would see -
My numbers would fall
The weight melt away 
No worries at all 
At the end of the day.
Stop smoking - stop drinking 
And look to your diet 
And also stop THINKING 
We need you to try it. 
Just follow the rule
As laid down by the nurse
She can be quite cruel
If you fail to reverse 
Yours will be the blame 
This you need to accept 
Its always the way
We've become quite adept 
All you need to do
Is to stick to your diet 
And swallow your pills 
You could at least try it 
What, test your own blood? 
Why would you do that? 
You know that you should 
Concentrate on the FAT! 
Yes, see you next year 
But before you leave now 
Just take this script here
And don’t cause a row 
Just one more small pill 
You must add to the mix
Its unlikely to kill 
But unlikely to fix
But what can I do?
I have boxes to tick
You are non compliant
I daren’t miss a trick
I need you to see
This disease can be beaten 
Just listen to me
Starchy carbs must be eaten
Cut the sat fat and salt 
But it will be fine
None can think it a fault 
To eat sugar in line 
With guidance from DUK
{Our saviour - you know} 
the result of this muck
Will very soon show
But look, Don't you worry 
All will yet be well 
There's really no hurry
Because I can tell -
The insulin pen
Is what you're aiming for
Once you have that 
You need worry no more 
What lose eyes and feet? 
Kidneys might fail?
Who tells you such things?
They should all be in jail!  
Its not worth a thought 
It wont happen to you 
Only happens to others
I thought that you knew
You must bear in mind 
That with your medication
You're unlikely to find 
Any true complication 
The truth is I fear 
With the toxins we give
Its become very clear 
You can‘t hope to live 
Much past your next birthday
I'm sorry to say it
But all must go someday
Why seek to delay it? 
So eat your repast 
And enjoy every bite
As if its your last
As it very well might 
I have tried to advise you
You must do the rest
Now this may surprise you 
But we do our best 
NHS or DUK 
To us its the same
You won't come unstuck
By choosing one name.
But Dr, You told me 
That I would be fine 
How could such a thing be
The fault isn't mine 
I see where I went wrong 
Hope its not too late 
It shouldn’t take too long
To alter my fate
I must do some homework
I must take control 
Its something I can’t shirk
That should be your role! 
Well yes - but we have rules
We must play the game
Most people are such fools
We can't take the blame
Now you have sussed us
I’ll give you some clues 
I can see you mistrust us
Its your turn to choose  
Some books you might buy 
And a website or two 
Just give them a try
I hope you'll pull through! 
I am so confused now 
It doesn’t make sense 
things you now tell me
I mean no offence 
But Doc its all wrong
You can’t let people die
You have to be strong
Its all a big lie
If there’s nothing more now
I have others to see
You'll work it out somehow 
Just don’t mention ME! 
Next patient please!!!!!! 
Kath
I don't want to think how much effort you put into that, Kath, but what a result !
ReplyDeleteTotally damning, and it rhymes !!
More power to your pen. Perhaps you're the next poet laureate : )
Geoff J
It’s my only talent Geoff - if you can call it that - and is actually no effort at all. But I am glad you liked it. The real effort here was put in by Jan and Eddie as it is in a format which is difficult to present on the blog. Writing it was much the easier and quicker part as it often is when things we feel strongly about are involved.
ReplyDeleteKath
Thanks Kath-It really IS talent to be able to sum up the current situation that we so often see through poetic verse-something I could NEVER do-Nice one! :-)
ReplyDeletePaul
Kath - I love your poems.
ReplyDeleteThey give an added dimension to the blog and are always well read. It is a talent/gift. Not everyone can write poems and get the absolute correct message over.
NICE one - no pun intended !
All the best Jan